General D&D discussion • Re: Bonus Material now live

Here are the major errors I spotted in the Director's Commentary. No major ones in story planning.

• 253: "This is the next stage in the GM’s reactions to Sally’s disruptive creativity echoes the sequence of the previous strip." [I can't find a way to parse this as a sentence.]
• 280: ["along" should be "alone"]
• 292: ["of" needed between "existence" and "Pocari Sweat"]
• 355: "exactlyu"

305 got me wondering about the spelling discrepancy between "Grand Mesa Plateau" and "Grand Mesra Plateau." Apparently the former spelling is from an old sourcebook that may have been used as a reference for the original comic. More confusingly, an old MMO gives the name as "Grand Mesric Plateau."

Statistics: Posted by Puppeteen — 23 Jan 2025 18:58

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